My First Day At School

Feb 14, 2020 By Maryn B, Age 9
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I was frightened I was scared I didn’t know what to do

I had confidence in me, it just wouldn’t come through

Then you came up to me said “Hi, what’s your name?’’

And from that moment on things just weren’t the same

We played many games and I met many people

Braeburn school felt as big as a steeple

But what I liked best of all was seeing the first graders in the hall

they had a good time just like me

As the hours passed, I could not believe it was already three

When the day had to come to an end

I ran to my mom and she met my new friend

I was really hot and needed a break

So when I got home I jumped in the pool and that got me really cool

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hunter.gonzales's picture
hunter.gonzales February 11, 2021 - 11:26am
This is just a little sad that she had this confidence.
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WiseCheeringChicken July 16, 2020 - 9:48pm
good
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WiseCheeringChicken July 16, 2020 - 9:26am
cool
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Vicky April 3, 2020 - 12:16pm
Wait are you playing with first graders when you're in 4th grade, or are you describing first grade?
Chanintelligent's picture
Chanintelligent March 20, 2020 - 1:33am
Exactly, she is only 9, don't judge it
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AnimatedCoder March 25, 2020 - 9:11pm
Yep
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aksis29 March 14, 2020 - 6:24am
that poem is epic!
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Keegant February 26, 2020 - 7:57am
Really? That is all you can write? But I like it.
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AnimatedCoder March 25, 2020 - 9:11pm
Seriously?
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kikigurl March 12, 2020 - 7:35am
Keegant that's not nice
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tooler7083 March 5, 2020 - 9:46am
she's 9 give her a break
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cmitchell01 February 25, 2020 - 11:40am
I love your poem!!!
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AnimatedCoder March 25, 2020 - 9:11pm
Yes!