Nightmare

Aug 12, 2020 By Vicky, 13
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I was strolling down the street when I saw a man in front of me,

He tilted his head to look at something which was quite unsightly,

I trained my eyes to look straight ahead,

but I suddenly glanced down and saw something that filled me with dread,

I screamed and ran and didn’t stop until I reached my bed,

I told my parents what I saw and they said it was all in my head,

I will never forget that ghastly thing,

Just the thought of it feels like a sting.

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2062829 October 7, 2020 - 8:14am
you rock
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Destiny D. September 16, 2020 - 2:52pm
AHHH! Good poem, great rhyme!
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GREY_HAWK731 September 9, 2020 - 2:13pm
Sounds creepy
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Kailesh12 September 2, 2020 - 11:20am
what was that thing???
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Vicky September 7, 2020 - 10:29pm
i guess you have to find out in your dreams ;)
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tay2010 August 26, 2020 - 1:47pm
Weird bro. I feel bad.
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Vicky August 30, 2020 - 9:37pm
Oh wait this didn't happen in real life, (just to be clear) I was basing this about a nasty thing I saw on the road and I think youngzine wanted to change it into a man instead. I agree because it has much more rhythm to it.
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2062829 October 7, 2020 - 8:14am
wow, wow
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smalltiger August 16, 2020 - 11:40pm
Nice
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Vicky August 23, 2020 - 6:57pm
Thanks :)
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YaNOOBZ September 1, 2020 - 8:48am
Eeek, must of been supa scary.