Where Am I From?

Feb 24, 2020 By Kavin V, Age 11
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Galaxy

I am from the 13 billion-year-old dot of energy that formed our Universe

I am from the dust of stars long dead

I am from the rocks that formed the earth

I am from the Sun's light that let life live on Earth

I am from the waters where life appeared

I am from the first life on Earth

I am from the trees where our ancestors lived

I am from the people of long ago that lived in Earth

I am from the land where the early humans hunted

I am from all that exists

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tay2010 August 26, 2020 - 2:06pm
Amazing, just amazing! Great job you did, just amazing in this poem!
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GREY_HAWK731 October 1, 2020 - 9:41am
AWESOME
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WiseCheeringChicken July 15, 2020 - 12:01pm
just good
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HighLordBigDog13 March 26, 2020 - 5:48am
Very impressive! I like the picture you chose. In fact, the poem really reminds me of the "End poem" from Minecraft, when you defeat the Ender dragon. Like if you understand what I mean :)
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SophiaJ March 18, 2020 - 4:39pm
Wonderful poem! ?
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goldenstar8 March 16, 2020 - 12:49pm
this poem inspires me a lot!
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xiaoqingc March 1, 2020 - 4:46pm
Great poem!
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cmitchell01 February 25, 2020 - 11:37am
I love this poem!!!
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smalltiger February 25, 2020 - 5:50am
Now that is what I call a real poem