Autumn Breeze: A Poem

Jun 12, 2012 By Daphne, 8
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Yellow leaves fall from trees,
leaving a beautiful autumn breeze.

Cooling gray chimney smoke,
making you want to wear a cloak.

Fall has come to sprinkle us all
with leaves from the trees
and some chimney fog.

Dry leaves fill the air,
whipping your hair everywhere.

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SophiaJ January 2, 2022 - 8:44am
Lovely description!
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tabah December 28, 2012 - 9:01pm

good effort Daphne!

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Peter12 August 11, 2012 - 7:16am

nice!

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Doggyrule June 24, 2012 - 10:35am
nice job
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JENNAH H_C June 16, 2012 - 2:20pm
I love it
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Rachel Catherine June 14, 2012 - 5:34pm

Great job! What a great poem!

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marian winslow June 13, 2012 - 3:57pm

nice job, Daphne!