The Peaceful Ocean

Jun 13, 2021 By Madhumitha, 10
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Listen to the waves of the ocean

The billows that break upon the shore

The current is strong and mighty

The tides of the ocean roar

 

The briny water sparkles in the moonlight

The little diamonds tickle my toes

The ocean water glimmers in the dark twilight

The alluring offing swallows my woes

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Carson.Thomas January 20, 2022 - 11:33am
5 stars. It was good.
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Madison.Jones January 20, 2022 - 7:13am
great poem fine stars five stars
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LilNachoPup January 5, 2022 - 7:36pm
this is so short and sweet =) I love it
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Syko Queen January 13, 2022 - 1:34am
i agree
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Shravan Prasath December 7, 2021 - 4:28pm
Great poem.
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wow this is the... November 29, 2021 - 9:03am
very cool poem, loved it five stars
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amritansh.singh August 15, 2021 - 12:12am
very nice
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Scarlet10 July 28, 2021 - 6:37pm
Exactly what i remember about the ocean
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SophiaJ July 5, 2021 - 4:40pm
Great job! 5 star!