An Autumn Tale - Part 2

Apr 10, 2011 By Jacki, 13
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Continued from An Autumn Tale - Part 1.

The tree’s voice, which had grown to an angry shout, dropped to a whisper.“They will reach for you first, Pretty One. You will be among the first to die, because of your perfect ruby skin. And I will stand here, watching, watching, my heart broken afresh with every cry you make. Through thirty generations of men I have lived on this earth, and my heart has been shattered thousands upon thousands of times, with each apple child that is cruelly taken from my branches.”

The old tree made a sound like weeping, its leaves swaying and sadly singing: All is sorrow. Happiness has gone, and today is withered. Sorrow. All is sorrow.

The apple quivered. She said to the tree, “I am not afraid. I have lived happily while I could, and if it is so that I must be eaten, then I shall go to my doom with courage.” A dewdrop ran down her cheek, but she bravely lifted her face to the sun.

That same day, a group of children arrived at the orchard for a tour., “I’m going to take you to some of our tastiest apples, the Empires,” their guide said. “Remember, when you pick an apple, lift it towards the sun and twist its stem gently, so that you won’t hurt the tree.” Little did she know how deeply she was hurting trees by ripping their children from them.

The children clattered noisily into the orchard. The beautiful little apple watched them arrive, and prepared herself for her imminent death as a small boy named William walked up to the tree on which she was hanging. “Look here, guys!” he shouted to the other children. “I’ve found a nice, tasty-looking one!” And without further ceremony, he promptly twisted the stem of the beautiful apple. Pain ripped through the apple, clouding her thought and blackening her vision. She moaned, a heartbreaking sound to those who could hear her. William couldn’t, and was unmoved by her pitiable state. Then the apple shivered, gasped, and died as she separated from her lifeline, her mother tree, and the tree groaned in anguish as the boy savagely tore into the apple’s flesh. “This is nice and juicy!” called William to his friend Catherine. Catherine came over and unfeelingly twisted more apples off of the poor tree, biting them and commenting on their unparalleled flavor. William finished off his apple, throwing the core at the base of the tree. The tree wept, but she felt grateful to him for leaving her all that remained of her lovely daughter.

As the tree had predicted, the children spread ruin and sorrow wherever they went in the orchard that day. After they had gone, the mother trees swayed and sang their funeral song for the heroic fallen apples. All is sorrow. Happiness is gone, and today is withered. Sorrow. All is sorrow.

Comments

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Abb April 29, 2022 - 4:51pm
BEUTIFUL. I loved this story. I hope you realize what a wonderful writer you really are. Keep writing! Love, Abb.
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Tressa February 17, 2014 - 12:47pm
I love apples. :) Very nicely written!
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Shizah February 28, 2012 - 8:54am

That was a very sad ending... :( You write very nice though...

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Ella February 16, 2012 - 7:34am
Awesome! Keep writing.
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AnikaP September 1, 2011 - 8:46am
Amazing!!! Better than the first part.
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Jacki April 16, 2011 - 6:26am
Thanks everybody for the comments! :)
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Arjun April 14, 2011 - 8:15pm

I was really hooked to the story and felt the pain the apple did when it was pulled out and eaten! Amazing story!

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Genna April 13, 2011 - 4:36pm
I like how much detail you go into. very nice job Jacki.
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Jacki April 11, 2011 - 10:51am

Just a note: William and Catherine are kids I know and I couldn't resist casting them as the villains. Oh, the part where the trees sing ("All is sorrow, happiness is gone, etc.) is supposed to be italicized. Sorry about that.

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Deepa Gopal April 13, 2011 - 1:36pm

We pulled out the personal references/relations in the comment.. :)

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Jacki April 13, 2011 - 5:46pm
Oh sorry!! I didn't even think of that. I'll watch my step in the future :)
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Sammy02 April 12, 2011 - 6:09am
The last line where you mentioned this phrase is in italics.
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Jacki April 13, 2011 - 6:27am
I think the editors changed that part after I commented on it, because it wasn't italicized at first!
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Deepa Gopal April 13, 2011 - 1:27pm

Yes, we did after your note. :)

It was in italics in your story, but when we copied it over, it was an oversight!

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Sammy02 April 11, 2011 - 3:47am
An inspiring biography of an apple! So, the message of this story is 'Stop eating apples'?
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Jacki April 11, 2011 - 10:47am
No, I actually eat apples a lot!I've just desensitized myself to their last mournful cries.
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Matthew14 April 11, 2011 - 2:50am
Great job, Jacki! I love this story!